Warriors ScorchFang's Omen

I like the prophecy,I will post the second chapter in the Into the wild graphic novel,specify that at the end of the first chapter so the readers know :3 And also I just got into Fnaf(I totally don’t have nightmares now 😅)And I watched Pokemon horizons,I also like Amethio Sounds good,just don’t forget I want to write some chapters specifically:Chapters 2,11 and 13 ————- I wish you a good day Byeee!!! PearGaze out! ~Ascends to StarClan~

The grammar and wording of things are just wrong and confusing, I’m in 6th grade and even my grammar is better. -Shadepaw/spirit of Pineclan/ da Blog (aka Blogclan, trust me, search it up,it’s life changing :) )

Can someone explain how to or what is this “adopt an oc” about??? I’m new to the sirize

The grammar is way off, but other than that it has an interesting plot. I just wanted to say, WHY IS LAKEPAW ASKING HER UNCLE TO BE HER MATE

If you want to adopt a cat just tell me and I will give it to you. 🟢= open for adoption 🔴= already adopted 🟢Birchleap - a white she-cat with black streaks and golden eyes 🟢Pineheart - a brown calico Tom with dark green eyes 🟢Maplefur - a ginger maine coon she-cat with blue eyes 🟢Quickclaw - a sleek black she-cat with green eyes 🟢Almondclaw - a brown tabby tom with dark brown patches and yellow eyes Sincerely, Cinderfern

You got the writing spirit! Just fix those mistakes and try to think of more descriptive words. Look at the world around you and really pause, add detail to everything the cat sees. Don’t give up! If you want, take a writing class to help you improve. 🐈🐈‍⬛🐈🐈‍⬛🐈🐈‍⬛🐈 ~ ✨ Starflame of GalaxyClan ✨

O.m.g this is a very detailed book there were some mistakes but it was still amazing.i was wondering if you could make a graphic novel because this book was so good that i would read it until 1 am.The art was amazing and i really loved the drama being there 24/7 my favorite character was probably russet fur she was really cool!.also here is my cat character : Glenda:a small yet feisty and warmhearted she kitty with a pretty pink sunset fading colored pelt her eyes are a light milky blue as well. :clan:shimmer clan. :role: was originally a kitty pet but was owned by a house folk who treated her poorly. :role now: a gentle and warmhearted queen helping out in the nursery. :bio: Glenda is a small yet feisty she kitty with a pretty sunset fading colored pelt with light milky blue eyes.she was originally a kitty pet but was Owned by a house folk who treated her poorly.she now has the proud role of a queen belong to a clan kind enough to take her in,shimmer clan. :that’s all,Glenda out yall😘

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Okay, so maybe the guy is in high school and maybe he wrote it like nine years ago or whatever but this is my review: 1) Don’t copy-write someone’s books, it totally belongs to them and you have no right to change up any parts of the story or even to legally publish this 2) Find an editor. The mistakes in here are simple, it’s stupid even people in high school can’t learn to right properly 3) DRAW BETTER. It looks bad, drawn with crayon is just the cherry on top. Hire someone better or find a cat photo on Google. You could legit take one of ur own cat. Anyway this is a short book that has u wasting money buying it😁 Worst book I’ve ever see published. Silverclaw of Moonclan

THIS BOOK IS AWESOME! But, one thing, could you maybe give credit to Erin Hunter?(im trying to be kind!) Besides that, I really recommend reading this book if you’re a warriors fan (like me!) Best wishes, -BristleFern of CliffClan / WindClan