Good story but poor syntax throughout the book
3
By Bonobo294
I really enjoyed this book. It has a lot of twist and turns, and there’s a good amount of psychological insight into Max and other characters.
I just wish the syntax were better. Too many sentences end with prepositions throughout the book. Punctuation could also be better. Even if I am reading a fiction novel, I want to be respected intellectually, and prefer when the author writes in logical sentence structures.
If it weren’t for the syntax and punctuation, I would have given this book 5 stars.
Great book
5
By ryders nana
This was one of the best books I’ve read lately. Great characters, good story line and left you guessing throughout. It was hard to put down.
Too many characters
3
By uprise24
This was a pretty good book...that being said, there were so many characters introduced that I spent most of my time in the "search" section trying to figure out who they were. Granted, I didn't read it straight through, but it was very confusing. Would've given it 4 stars if not for the above.