Protecting His Forever

This is amazing! It was hard to put down. Honestly wish I had my own Kane in my life. The way he goes to bat for his family is nothing short of beautiful. Kane was a man on a mission this whole book. He did not let anyone or anything stop him from protecting his family.

Couldn’t put it down!

The title says it all. This is like the climax of seven different books spread out over a course of 250 pages. I felt like I was in a never-ending episode of Grey’s Anatomy with all the near-death, live-altering catastrophes these characters went though. Getting attacked in the first chapter can work if you then develop and resolve the trauma from that. It moved from trauma to trauma to trauma and it made my head spin. I honestly skimmed the whole thing because I couldn’t even keep my attention on it for longer than 15 minutes so kudos to those who read cover to cover. The bones are good and there is a good story here, but it would’ve been better had there been resolution and not time-jumping like crazy. I don’t even want to read the other book now. It was a swing and a miss for me, but if you have no sense of grammar, story development, character development, and a love for plot holes this may be the story for you.

Thanks for a lovely story. I loved the full story and the characters.

The author can’t even keep straight who her brother is. And the thousand lines of “kid dialogue” was hard to read threw. I ended up skimming through a lot of this book.

I love this book perfect balance of happy sad and dangerous. I will read it again and again!!!!! Definitely recommend!!!!!

This book was written well and I enjoyed it overall, but it seems that the storyline became engulfed with the abuse drama. Not everyone has to have such a difficult life. Depressing to read it.

Excellent read!!

Juvenile writing. Lacks a variety of vocabulary. A 16/17 year old could have written this. Characters are created with the type of innocence that's too overdone and there's no character to anyone. Cute plot, needs editing.

I understand this was a writing debut but having honest folks in your life to give you feedback is important. This book has ZERO character development. So much effort was put into trying to make them go through any and all, completely unfeasible, bad situations that there was literally no time to back build. There was zero attachment to the characters. The relationships were unfounded and not believable. There were a few sweet/funny moments and I was vaguely interested enough to see where it was going to finish reading it but it was like being horribly drawn to watching a train wreck in slow motion. I applaud the author for putting herself out there. That's seriously ballsy. But, get editors and proofreaders in your life. Spend some time building the story up. If 1/2 of what they went through was taken out and you built them up more you'd have such a better story and it was seem believable.